This is wrong by ambtax1
|Title||This is wrong|
|Score||4, 3, 1||Total Points: 8 (3 Votes)|
|1st Place Vote||5 Points||2nd Place Vote||4 Points||3rd Place Vote||3 Points||4th Place Vote||2 Points||5th Place Vote||1 point|
Ok, this is unfinished, rushed and a bit (lot) crap. I just wanted an entry. Been very busy recently and not had time to do much tracking. Looking forward to listening to everyones entries.
Comment by Knetter on 2007-06-25 12:29:16
Sounds a bit harsh with rushed transitions. I really like your chords @ p29, why not expanding this theme and continue there @p39?
Comment by andyray on 2007-06-25 16:15:58
well, looks like you nailed most critisism yourself... ;) I second Knetter... There's a good few seeds for a good composition here... just weed out the unnecessary bits... I guess you wanted way too much in too short'a time, huh? you've proven your worth before so I look forward to your next entry... given more concentration...
Keep it up, man!
Comment by Dreamer on 2007-06-26 10:01:59
I like the synth and chords.. the rest of the track sounds indeed rushed.. and i'm missing a ending.
Comment by overthruster on 2007-06-26 22:27:55
i really like the melody that starts around p20, the snare rushes in "change" really rubbed me the wrong way, and the snyth stab bits that start at 29 really stick out ... if more of the track had that crisp high end and stereo sound they wouldnt stick out so bad, the snare especially could use some serious eqing or something you can barely hear it when other stuff is going on its so mushy.
but i mean, its a good track, the musical aspects of it i really like alot, beat and melody chords etc... the little 16th note arp thing i dont like but its just a stylistic preference.
all in all i say great track. if given more time to polish it up im sure it would be totally excellent.
Comment by Sonicade on 2007-06-27 00:16:14
This has the makings of a sweet track. Drum beat and musical ideas are good. Great arpeggio stabs at P30. The bassline is good overall but I didnt really care for bass stab on every beat around P17-P25. Perhaps if it was varied every pattern or two to mix it up a bit. That same bassline worked really well at P38-40 though.
It does sound unfinished but I'm no stranger to that in my own tracks. Some very cool ideas here, this track has a lot of potential. Great work!
Comment by directionless on 2007-06-27 18:48:22
i like it and usually prefer work that is rough around the edges as opposed to super-polished production. that's just what art means to me. plus i really liked the melodies. :) my vote for 5
Comment by Relabs on 2007-06-30 17:30:03
So maybe it is unfinished, rushed and a-bit-crap tune, but nice tune nevertheless if you ask me.