Makeato Growth by BruchFrei
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Comment by directionless on 2007-11-24 12:42:56
Cool man. Welcome. You've got an original piece here. I'm having trouble placing it, and that's a good thing i think!!
Just a bit more volume overall... is my only suggestion.... oh, besides, needs an ending, for the Mp3 at least.
Please come back. :)
Comment by BruchFrei on 2007-11-24 13:56:54
Thanks. And yeah, I know what you mean. It was kind of a slap together effort on the last couple of days as I wasn't going to enter and then decided just to have a go. I also noticed after I'd sent the entry in that I stuffed up and selected the intro beat at the end.
Thanks again for the input though, being a beginner in tracking any advice on how to improve is always good.
Comment by ambtax1 on 2007-11-27 17:18:20
Hello hello, Nice little piece. Nothing too exciting but interesting use of the vsts. I liked your drum use. Simple hats and snares but very effective and drove the tune along well.
Comment by Aged on 2007-11-28 08:44:42
I'm not going to tell you what to do, but i might give you a little tip... "think simple" :)
Lost my focus while trying to listen all the melodies at the same time.
Overall this is a great track for a "beginner"! Good choice of sounds :)
Comment by organic_io on 2007-11-28 12:12:17
this has got a nice atmospheric vibe... nice string and synth work, it interacts with the bassline nicely. i agree with ambtax about the drums, the snare just makes it bop right along... hope to hear more from you soon
Comment by techtonic on 2007-11-29 18:28:58
I've heard worse, but you need to put more focus in there - I wasn't sure which part to listen to even after repeated listening. I do like the circular approach though :-) and the instruments are good.
Comment by aGIANTpupafish on 2007-11-30 11:11:51
quite nice. didn't really seem to go anywhere though (which i guess is the opposite to my problem - i go too many places!)
Comment by tenfour on 2007-11-30 14:03:06
Really amazing tune - I especially love how you work with that motif. I just wish it was finished. Can you tell me more about yourself as a musician? Can you tell me about your decisions in this song?
Comment by BruchFrei on 2007-12-01 04:59:14
ambtax1: Yeah I was kind of happy with the hats and snares myself except for the rushed mistake at the end.
Aged: Thanks, yeah I see what you mean. The saying works well, sometimes less is more.
Dj_io: There will definitely be more and with each track I do I am always learning something so hopefully I will continue to improve with that.
Techtonic/aGIANTpupafish: Focus is probably one of the main things I have trouble with because I never really have a set plan as such when I do any tracks. I'll just start with one thing and then in my head I will hear something else and just keep adding without any idea on direction etc so all it ever ends up being is just a short repetitive sample. But with time I am hoping to progress with that.
tenfour: Thanks. I wasn't expecting such an enthusiastic response and yeah, I wish it were finished as well, unfortunately trying to cram the making of a full track into the space of a few hours doesn't quite work, not to mention that I still at the moment have trouble finishing tracks due to lack of knowledge on where to go to after a section to get the feel that I am after. As a musician I have mostly just dabbled with playing drums/bass/guitar/recorder/keyboard/violin playing by ear but never properly learning theory other than notes and a couple of basic scales like C Major for example. :P With time/practice and more study I'm sure I'll get there though.