unfinished mess hall by organic_io
| Round | 3 |
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| Author | organic_io |
| Title | unfinished mess hall |
| MP3 Link | http://djio4sdcompo.googlepages.com/dj_io_-_unfinished_messhall.mp3 |
| Module Link | sdc3_djio-unfinished-mess-hall.rar |
| Filesize | 2417KB |
| Score | 2 | Total Points: 2 (1 Votes) |
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| 1st Place Vote | 5 Points | 2nd Place Vote | 4 Points | 3rd Place Vote | 3 Points | 4th Place Vote | 2 Points | 5th Place Vote | 1 point |
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Authors' Notes
didn't really work on this as much as i should. still i might take this chord progression and use it for a real song... not sure.
Comments
Comment by Harmony on 2006-05-19 02:30:27
What there is is cute and catchy :) I think you should definately keep working on this one. My only thought for improvement was the bass which is a bit monotonous (hitting on the same beat constantly), if you mixed that up a bit I think it would make a big difference.
Comment by organic_io on 2006-05-19 09:31:38
thanks for the comment! the idea for the bass was to keep it going on the triplets to hear how it interacted with the 4/4 beat... it was kinda an experiment.
Comment by Sonicade on 2006-05-20 11:55:55
This is pretty cool. It's kind of sparse but I like the style and idea behind it. The bassline and melodies are good and with further development could make for a very catchy tune. Probably would benefit from bringing in some pads or strings for added texture. As the title says it feels a bit unfinished but is a good base with lots of potential.
Comment by overthruster on 2006-05-23 10:05:38
fun and funky... i prefer more minimal instrumentation like this in techno/dance music, i LOVED the bassline
Comment by RobWilliamsJnr on 2006-05-24 22:20:07
Cool ideas! Mixing triplets into 4/4 is fun!!!
