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unfinished mess hall by organic_io

Round 3
Author organic_io
Title unfinished mess hall
MP3 Link http://djio4sdcompo.googlepages.com/dj_io_-_unfinished_messhall.mp3
Module Link sdc3_djio-unfinished-mess-hall.rar
Filesize 2417KB
Score 2Total Points: 2 (1 Votes)
1st Place Vote5 Points2nd Place Vote4 Points3rd Place Vote3 Points4th Place Vote2 Points5th Place Vote1 point

Authors' Notes

didn't really work on this as much as i should. still i might take this chord progression and use it for a real song... not sure.

Comments

Comment by Harmony on 2006-05-19 02:30:27

What there is is cute and catchy :) I think you should definately keep working on this one. My only thought for improvement was the bass which is a bit monotonous (hitting on the same beat constantly), if you mixed that up a bit I think it would make a big difference.

Comment by organic_io on 2006-05-19 09:31:38

thanks for the comment! the idea for the bass was to keep it going on the triplets to hear how it interacted with the 4/4 beat... it was kinda an experiment.

Comment by Sonicade on 2006-05-20 11:55:55

This is pretty cool. It's kind of sparse but I like the style and idea behind it. The bassline and melodies are good and with further development could make for a very catchy tune. Probably would benefit from bringing in some pads or strings for added texture. As the title says it feels a bit unfinished but is a good base with lots of potential.

Comment by overthruster on 2006-05-23 10:05:38

fun and funky... i prefer more minimal instrumentation like this in techno/dance music, i LOVED the bassline

Comment by RobWilliamsJnr on 2006-05-24 22:20:07

Cool ideas! Mixing triplets into 4/4 is fun!!!

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