unfinished mess hall by organic_io
|Title||unfinished mess hall|
|Score||2||Total Points: 2 (1 Votes)|
|1st Place Vote||5 Points||2nd Place Vote||4 Points||3rd Place Vote||3 Points||4th Place Vote||2 Points||5th Place Vote||1 point|
didn't really work on this as much as i should. still i might take this chord progression and use it for a real song... not sure.
Comment by Harmony on 2006-05-19 02:30:27
What there is is cute and catchy :) I think you should definately keep working on this one. My only thought for improvement was the bass which is a bit monotonous (hitting on the same beat constantly), if you mixed that up a bit I think it would make a big difference.
Comment by organic_io on 2006-05-19 09:31:38
thanks for the comment! the idea for the bass was to keep it going on the triplets to hear how it interacted with the 4/4 beat... it was kinda an experiment.
Comment by Sonicade on 2006-05-20 11:55:55
This is pretty cool. It's kind of sparse but I like the style and idea behind it. The bassline and melodies are good and with further development could make for a very catchy tune. Probably would benefit from bringing in some pads or strings for added texture. As the title says it feels a bit unfinished but is a good base with lots of potential.
Comment by overthruster on 2006-05-23 10:05:38
fun and funky... i prefer more minimal instrumentation like this in techno/dance music, i LOVED the bassline
Comment by RobWilliamsJnr on 2006-05-24 22:20:07
Cool ideas! Mixing triplets into 4/4 is fun!!!