this track is a mess, but so am i by overthruster
|Title||this track is a mess, but so am i|
|Score||3, 3, 1, 1||Total Points: 8 (4 Votes)|
|1st Place Vote||5 Points||2nd Place Vote||4 Points||3rd Place Vote||3 Points||4th Place Vote||2 Points||5th Place Vote||1 point|
Comment by overthruster on 2006-06-11 04:57:51
man the other entries are really kicking ass this time, i certainly dont stick out like last round :D im happy~!
Comment by Sonicade on 2006-06-11 06:10:01
I like what you've done with the pack. Great intro, I like the spacey pads and deep foreboding strings. The chiming piano chords have an almost horror movie feel. Cool atmosphere, very eerie in an exciting way. Cool, creative track. Good work!
Comment by organic_io on 2006-06-11 19:15:49
funky shit you did with the chicka-wah-wah guitar :)
definitely rich atmosphere.. nice work on the pianos.
the bassline that comes in around pattern 27 seems like it hits too fast and it kinda looses its bass-ness.
please stay in the sdcompo
Comment by drye on 2006-06-12 01:53:04
I like the creepy-trippy feel of the song. Nice work on the beats. Good job.
Comment by RobWilliamsJnr on 2006-06-14 20:43:14
i also like what you've done with the pack. using some of my fave samples! i especially like your detuned piano, (hammer + piano). cool bass, awesome rythym and great sound scape.
Comment by dilvie on 2006-06-16 14:39:11
Intro sound is wonderful. Love the dissonance there. Very nice. What ruined this for me was the piano. Low octave piano dissonance tends to sound pretty ugly, and not in a good way. I like the dissonances, but they could have been voiced better, IMO. I also think you could have done a better job with the dynamics on the percussion. When you drop out the piano, things start to get interesting. I've never heard an acoustic bass sound like that, before! I like the snare work in there, and I like the upper register dissonance. Some very cool ideas here, but it feels a bit rushed. Did I mention I loved your use of the porn guitar? =) That was cool, too.
Again, here, your style is your strength, but I feel like you could have done better on the production, with a little more time and effort invested. Keep it up!